a rather nice comic, better than most which have blantent plots or terrible drawings, this one has both
one thing i do like about it is how this can be an actual ingame conversation, said between teammates, instead of trying to stay with actual tf2 plot, and how you "tried" to put some accents in (which you did very well at may i add) but then mixed it around with mainly english so you dont sound like a fool who actually knows what he is writing.
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nice job here beautiful artwork a great little bit or humor on the dangers of demo bottles and it was something i haven't seen i a long time so i thank you for this beautiful artwork and i hope to see more like this one,things like your artwork inspires people like me to do great things like write a story paint a picture draw a dream anything is possible when great artwork is involved.I have to say though wish you colored a bit more but still artwork is beautiful and cleverly done and i thank you for this art and reading my nonsense but still good job cant wait to see more.
I ain't got no beef with the scot. My issue is with that one soldier with the rage-inducing rocket launcher that kills ya with one shot. One bloody shot. Any solution?
one thing i do like about it is how this can be an actual ingame conversation, said between teammates, instead of trying to stay with actual tf2 plot, and how you "tried" to put some accents in (which you did very well at may i add) but then mixed it around with mainly english so you dont sound like a fool who actually knows what he is writing.
this critique needs one hundred words right? ok then what to say?
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